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Looking to take your script up to the next level? Or are you a newbie who’s just finished their first draft? Either way, I can help.

I’m a produced, full-time screenwriter with twenty years experience. I have two series in development at cable and streaming platforms, and two optioned features in active development with producer/directors. I’ve also been teaching an online screenwriting class for five years now.

I’ll read your script, take copious notes, and then have one-hour phone call with you to go over what works and what needs work. (After which I’ll send you my comments.) My notes are positive and helpful, and many of my clients end up getting excited to work on the next draft after our call – and some even come back to me for another evaluation.

I’ll give you in-depth analysis and give you notes on format, grammar style, tone, pacing, theme and structure. I’ll also tell you who might be interested in your project and even where to send it for consideration. In short, it’s much more than just an analysis. I’ll give you full picture of the playing field in Hollywood – and how you can get in the game.

My fee is $200, and depending on how busy I am, the turnaround time is usually just a couple of of days. Drop me a line and let’s talk. I’m eager to help.
  • do NOT contact me with unsolicited services or offers

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