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►ADMISSIONS ESSAYS and PERSONAL STATEMENTS ►EXPERT EDITING ► (FREE SAMPLE EDIT - FAST SERVICE - BETTER THAN AI!)

"The essays are beautiful. Thank you so much. You are just awesome!" —Omar M.

Gain Admission to Your Top-Choice Program
Dave Bolick, 510-601-9554
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Competition for the top university and grad-school programs is intense. That's why clear, compelling admissions essays and personal statements can help maximize your chances of being accepted.

I can help, with the highest quality admissions essay editing services available anywhere. In my 20-plus years of experience as a professional admissions consultant, I've helped hundreds of applicants gain admission to every leading college and university, including Harvard, Stanford, Columbia, Yale, Princeton, Duke, Dartmouth, Penn, Cornell, Brown, MIT, Northwestern, Chicago, UC Berkeley, and UCLA; every top-ten MBA, LAW, and MED program; and scores of other undergraduate, professional, and Ph.D. programs.

FREE sample edit, NO-SURPRISES pricing
Find out how you can gain a critical advantage over the competition. Email me your draft as a file attachment using the "reply" button at the top of this page. I'll provide a brief sample edit of your essay or statement at no charge to show you what I can do for you. I will also quote the exact fee before work begins: no surprises, no hidden costs.

I will help you improve your chances of admission to your top-choice program(s) by:
  • Presenting a compelling story that grabs and holds the admissions committee's interest
  • Enhancing the impact of your essays with stronger word choices and clear, concise sentences and paragraphs
  • Improving the logical organization of your material
  • Eliminating extraneous detail, to demonstrate that you're a focused, clear-thinking candidate
  • Eliminating cliches and overused expressions, to show that you're an original-thinking candidate
  • Crafting stronger introductions and conclusions
  • Minimizing the impact of negative elements in your background
  • Ensuring flawless grammar and punctuation
Send me your draft for a free sample edit or call me at 510-601-9554 for more information.

Can you make my AI-generated content sound like a human wrote it?

Yes! ChatGPT and other AI tools are useful for drafting material quickly, but it's usually very obvious that the material is machine-written. Plus, admissions committees routinely use GPTzero.com to scan essays, which flags AI content with a high degree of accuracy (try it!). Ask yourself: is it worth the risk? I'll edit your AI-written content so that your application doesn't land on the reject pile before it even gets read.

FAST turnarounds
Once you give me the go-ahead, my turnarounds are fast—usually within 24-48 hours—and if you need to make any final minor changes, you're welcome to send me your doc for final polishing at no extra charge.

Don't trust your future to an amateur
Creating successful essays and personal statements requires skills that far too many self-proclaimed "editors" and "proofreaders" simply do not have, including some who claim to specialize in admissions essays. I am an experienced professional, with more than 20 years of success helping applicants gain admission to leading U.S. and international programs.

Call or write to find out more about how I can help you improve your chances, and feel free to send me your draft for a free sample edit.

Confidentiality GUARANTEED
My service is absolutely confidential, and I don't use employees or sub-contractors. I alone will see and work on your essays.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Dave Bolick, editor, admissions consultant
510-601-9554
www.davebolick.com/academic/admissionsessays.pdf


Your personal essays are your last best chance to gain admission to the program of your choice. Make the most of the opportunity—call or email me to learn more.


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"I really appreciate your help. I will recommend you highly to my friends and colleagues.
—Prianka K.


"This is perfect, thank you! Outstanding work." —Peter T.

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—Angela P.

"The essay looks great. I appreciate your help!" —Miguel G.

"Wonderful. Thank you so much." —Huang X.

"Dave, just wanted to let you know that our son got into ASU Barrett Honors College. Thank you for your help." —Mary H. 

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"I am very pleased with your work. You are a great writer!" —Nicole H.

Thank you very much. Your writing is beautiful. —Katherine T.

Thanks Dave! You really are amazing." —Barbara L.

"Wow! I'm definitely saving you for future edits!" —David C.

"The essays look great! You haven't changed the originality of my thoughts, but you've presented them so much more clearly. Thank you so much for your help." —Ganesh R.

"These are excellent/perfect! Thanks so much!" —William B.

"Dave, thanks very much for the great work on my admissions essays. This is exactly what I was trying to say. You brought out all the most important points perfectly." —Jason H.

"This looks great. Thank you very much for your help. I'll get back to you soon about my other essays and letters of recommendation." —Janusz P.

"Dave, thanks for the quick turnaround. This looks great. I'll be sending you my essays for other programs as well." —Hari P.

"The edited version is great! I will recommend you to all of my friends, and I will be in touch next year when my daughter is applying to college." —Margaret M.

"Thank you so much for the revised version. I have read it over and it is great. The content, with the edited transitions, flows much better than before." —Edward W.




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